prompt: “Chocolate Milk :0)”

It’s kind of funny that this one is a little sad, seeing as the prompt was from my childhood best friend…a friendship I have happy memories of


4 Comments

Benjamin Green · October 13, 2011 at 2:16 PM

One of my fondest memories is blowing into a plastic cup of chocolate milk with a bendy straw. The cup’s plastic label was peeling and filled with tiny air bubbles that I would poke, that were the raised head of some cartoon character.

To me, this one encapsulated the burden of youth. Nicely done.

    b r · October 19, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    I could clearly see that moment you shared…timeless! Thanks for reading.

Tammy · October 14, 2011 at 5:50 AM

Your second stanza is my absolute favorite.

    b r · October 19, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    I’ve been rewriting a lot of these poems for consideration in my Typewriter Poetry chapbook…and that second stanza you mentioned has been getting on my nerves. I’m never sure if I should keep it or tweak it or leave it as is. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it–now I know to keep it!

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