Originally Posted: January 17th, 2012
Updated: January 4th, 2020
Another orphaned poem. I’m not quite sure what the prompt was, but this one–though ‘unfinished’–feels like a completed poem to me.
I know now
there are moments
I can never take back.
Originally Posted: January 17th, 2012
Updated: January 4th, 2020
Another orphaned poem. I’m not quite sure what the prompt was, but this one–though ‘unfinished’–feels like a completed poem to me.
I know now
there are moments
I can never take back.
Absolutely!! Short, to the point, with a good flow. I like!!!
A simple, but very important thought.
If you hadn’t mentioned it was unfinished, I would’ve thought it was complete!
Perfect and so true.