Originally Posted: April 1st, 2012
Updated: May 26th, 2020
Couple #1: the first poem in the Couples Series. This one was inspired by the feeling of inevitability right before a relationship break-up.
COUPLE #1
Must have been winter
when we last laughed
over coffee
and my scorched tongue
— billimarie
april 1st 2012
occultoantonio –
to write with typewriter is really inspiration, beautiful short poem
Richard Guest –
Great piece! I love it.
mackenziefiorente –
I love your style. I recognize myself in everything you write. Simple yet profound. Just like poetry should be.
Richard P –
You’ve put so much, so simply, into so few words. I love it.
Tammy –
I do love this one.